All Comments on 'Elise's Cottage Life Ch. 01'

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NewAgeEroticaNewAgeEroticaalmost 4 years ago
LOVE IT

Can’t wait for more! This is one of my favorites!

Ashuttle9696Ashuttle9696almost 4 years ago
Light Hearted and Sexy

Love it, Elise is a wonderful character, upbeat and sexy. Great tone for the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Thank God your back!

Best writer of super hot miscommunication in the world! True Master.

snugglepuss13snugglepuss13almost 4 years ago
I dread the time in between your postings

Please keep writing. We love your work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great...Now I'm going to have to check every five min. for Ch.2

She's so hot!!! Let's all Kickstarter so Captain_Ron can do this full-time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Easily my favorite writer on literorica

Another great story! Thanks for producing such fun work

SuperfluousOneSuperfluousOnealmost 4 years ago
You're back! And it's great!

Just have to drop a line to say that I'm super stoked that you are returning to this saga of Elise and Kevin and company. The setting change and the addition of some newer characters really heightens the stakes of the game, or at least it seems that's where things are headed. You could practically do 10 more stories, fleshing out the universe that you've created for these two. I mean, And I especially like the fact that you dialed things back, as far as what Kevin knows and how brazen Elise is, from the Elise and Emily series. It just gives you that much more room to ramp things back up in other ways..

Can't wait to see more! Hit me up if you need ideas! I've got a ton. Plus I'm planning on creating a series in this vein as well. Probably within the next couple of months.

pantsalonkspantsalonksalmost 4 years ago
Naughty woman as usual

"I'll try my best to make sure nobody, especially you, feels left out this weekend" wrll dang.she going to be sucking everyone cocks.

DeathofRomeoDeathofRomeoalmost 4 years ago
Love!

Thank everything that is good that you are still posting masterpieces like this. Please continue posting your amazing stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Phenomenal

Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
WELCOME BACK !

Sometimes,one can only fully appreciate the brilliance of something when it is no longer there.Since your hiatus,I've been searching for similar stories to your outstanding body of work.Let me tell you,the others can't hold a candle to you.Your character development,erotically charged scenarios and compelling narrative are of an extremely high calibre.I was overjoyed to see that you were back.Elise is simply electric,what a woman.Your inventiveness in dreaming up new situations whereby Elise can exploit the ambiguity is breathtaking,truly brilliant.I check everyday for chapter 2 of this particular strand.Thankyou so very much.

sk0on4v4ssk0on4v4salmost 4 years ago
Great start to another Elise chapter

Another naughty epic keep up the great work. Only wish you had several 100-page Elise volumes to keep us tied over till the next chapter ;).

Thanks again!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Any update?

Any word on part two? Or have we given hope on more stories?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Duuuuuuuuuuuude

Duuuuuuuuuuuude

I like this series

DeathofRomeoDeathofRomeoover 3 years ago
Favorite Author

I hope life finds you well and I can't wait for more of your stories!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Would be good to have a chapter where Kevin is the 'winner' for once and gets to fuck other girls with elise watching and getting nothing

Maybe make it his birthday 🤣

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is so good. You need to keep posting more from the Elise series pleaseee.

pantsalonkspantsalonksover 2 years ago

I think it be hot to fully what went on during the "elise and my roommates" timeline through shawn and matts perspective

DomindiDomindiover 2 years ago

No part 2? This was great

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good story, wish we had more.

naurdnaurdalmost 2 years ago

Part 2 waiting room

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

He thought the firmness test had to do with pillows? That's so bad it almost spoiled this one. Otherwise it was fun.

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January 28, 2023 I had always wanted to make a series out of That Was Then. I must have tried writing a follow up 100 times. Chapter 2 will be posted soon, only four years later than intended. --- Thank you to everyone who took the time to read my stories, I hoped you enjo...

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