All Comments on 'Eliza Havering Ch. 01'

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Charmles over 3 years ago

Interesting and intriguing. Wanting more!

Anonymousover 3 years ago

Nothing happens ... but it is strangely hypnotic and there are hidden promises of things to come I feel. I'm reserving judgement.

Well written though.

Vickie2 over 1 year ago

Great work Chris. I love the writing style and character development. The cliffhanger ending to part one was a great place to pause. By the way, do you have Eliza's number? I know a lot of people that could use her help. hahaha.... just kidding, I do love the story though.

Anonymous11 months ago

Nice opening and character development. Looking forward to chapter 2.

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