All Comments on 'Eliza's New Lover Pt. 03'

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premshankerpremshankerover 2 years ago

It is not clear why every time it is 'unfinished' episode.

Is it to keep the Reader in 'tenterhook' ?

Or keep it alive so one anxiously craving for "what next" !!!

Or lack of material ??

R_U_RomanticR_U_Romanticover 2 years ago

Loved it! You're building the anticipation for what I suspect will be a very hot experience for Eliza, and an eye-opening weekend for him. Can't wait for Pt. 04

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It is not more lovely wifes. It‘s fetish

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Yep just another pathetic cuck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

My take on this. "Adios, bitch."

GamblnluckGamblnluckover 2 years ago

No way. I'd hoped you were going to redeem yourself. But you let this 'girlfriend ' turn him into a eunuch cuck. the new lover is bigger and better than him sexually and he is allowing it. He needs to say go have fun, I'm outa here. 1 star for a piece of crap story.

graymangazergraymangazerover 2 years ago

A standard cuck tale, but we'll told. I wish it had something a bit more original though, at the moment it's all about her pleasure and the dominant lover. Nothing wrong with that but everything seems to be heading toward what's been done before, it won't be long till he's locked into a cock cage and forbidden to have sex sex with his wife, again no problem just a little overused, already the lover has a huge cock, probably the most common and tedious thing in cuck stories.

I'm enjoying this story as I enjoy a lot of stories regardless of the subject but I'm hoping for an original aspect along the line.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Definitely WACC. Eating cream pies and cleaning cock cuming up. Eliza's a kind of a sadist that enjoys pulling the wings off flys. She gets off inflicting pain, hurt and humiliation on the man she says she "loves". Of course he's a masochist of a sorts so I guess it is loving causing him pain, jealousy and lots of humiliation since that what he wants. Where is his cock cage? Eliza needs a guy she can dominate. Would she be submissive to Rich if she didn't have "l" (mr cuck doesn't seem to even have a name...), her bitch boyfriend to turn around and dominate. Transferring her submission to him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Weak plot and story, nothing original in this story, no loving wife either, its a Fetish story with cuck shiit and domination

OOAAOOAAover 2 years ago

UFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF Super hot!!!!!! Please, continue it soon!!!

premshankerpremshankerover 2 years ago

Interesting story.

But far too many repetition and cumbersome phrases

Better make it crisp, sharp and graphic

elephanticelephanticover 2 years ago

Good momentum. More?

sf_operative63sf_operative63over 2 years ago

If one is interested in this stuff it might be an ok read. But for those like myself, all I can say is thank God it's fiction...I do t know of any respecting man who would go along with this..

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

My wife and I enjoyed this latest installlment tremdously. Eliza sat on his face and masturbated herself to an orgasm. As my wife reminded me, that is a great first step in his cuckold training. Also, buying sexy swimwear, lingerie, and dresses for a lover is very hot. I remember the first time one of my wife’s lovers gave her a spending account to get her ready for him! We can’t wait to see the lover dominate both her and him. Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Go to the showers! Now!

Take it like a sissy, get in that ol good ZyclonB shower and let’s get rid of the dirt.

R.I.P…iss

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

another loser wimp undick guy. . . Don't have a guts to act like real man loser

Buster2UBuster2U39 minutes ago

10 Big Blazing stars but James should bring a gun and put a bullet into Rich's brain bucket for seducing a married woman who secretly desires to be a slut and a whore. Poor James, just because he is 'easy going' his slut wife takes advantage of him and is going to take him to a rendezvous that he will be trapped at, continuously breaking James Heart in the most tortuous manner possible. Poor James should have just told his wife to "Forget it!" we go back to normal or you can get the fuck out! Buster2U

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