All Comments on 'Ellie, Naked'

by mrs_mackenzie

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HectorBidonHectorBidon3 months ago

750 very nice words. Lovely setup, lovely vignette.

Rob_RoyaleRob_Royale3 months ago

Fun and sexy. Well done.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy3 months ago

Real fun on the beach!

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StrappySandalsStrappySandals3 months ago

A very pleasant 750- words. You two seem like a fun couple! And, I would enjoy watching the post beach video of that afternoon!

zooliciouszoolicious3 months ago

These words leave my mind creating many more.

djripdjrip3 months ago

Gonna have to rub some aloe on that ass later!

AlinaXAlinaX3 months ago

Thoroughly enjoyed this. Nicely done.

Tail_GunnerTail_Gunner3 months ago

I love it! ...

... you write really good, straight forward stuff. ... will keep an eye out for more in the future.

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Thanks Levi

kc12cooperkc12cooper3 months ago

That was great!

EmilyMillerEmilyMiller3 months ago

Thanks for taking part and an interesting take on the image 😊 Emily

SeaPoetSeaPoet3 months ago

Great little story It didn't take long for me to get pretty hard thinking about how aroused she became exposing herself like that

FlamethrowFlamethrow3 months ago

What a beautiful, sensual image you have created.

jeb51jeb51about 2 months ago

Loved it ! Kind of a casual tension: acceptance of challange but neither daredevil or reluctant. Very well conveyed.

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