All Comments on 'Em & Mike Ch. 10.5: Betrayal'

I gave it 5 despite no action as I like these guys so much but I feel that I was tease more than mike and if you tease the reader on purpose thats naughty. Why are the minichapters out of order

Hello Anon.

Ha! I am so glad someone got the joke. Yes, sorry I was teasing my readers with that one.

Only a shorty though, didn't take up too much of your time.

I am naughty, 'tis true.

It does also lead into the next full chapter though, which took a different direction that I expected.

Also let's face it - you will never look at a Kit Kat the same way!

Regarding the mini chapters, I don't know, they do appear out of sequence, but it's no biggie, just follow the numbers.

Thanks for posting, EmAG

Lol, clearly 5 ⭐️ it would be wrong not to. The KitKat took it like a champ.

Tess (uk)

Fun times with a Kit Kat.

Obviously 'Emily' managed to do it without looking like a toddler!

Don't try this at home folks.

EmAG

Too much cock!

Kat's friend Mary :)

Hi Mary,

Well obviously! Because...deep breath... I'm about to gross you out...cock turns me on.

^_*

Sorry, not sorry!

Lovely to hear from you.

EmAG