All Comments on 'Emma'

OMG I love it!

You’ve made me seem both sexy and stupid, all at the same time!

I love the fact that I’m so naive about what’s gone on! Just a shame it’s not possible for real!

Thank you, and can’t wait to see what happens to me next x

Would love to read more, i like the concept and cant wait to see what john does next.

Just a small bit of advice maybe try asking someone to proof read. In a few places spell check had changed "whore" to "whole". I'd be happy to help.

Good start; this really deserves more chapters taking the young lady back to the hypnotist to plant more suggestions that take her down the road to full prostitution.