All Comments on 'Emma Ch. 02'

by tmwastmwas

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thedayafterthedayafterover 4 years ago
Hmmm!

Still not sure where this story is going. The first chapter was under the incest genre but had no beginning relationships or sex. This chapter, under the exhibitionist genre, just had flashing of cleavage.

Both chapters are well written but haven't gone anywhere yet.

Will keep watching to see where the author eventually takes this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice start.

Keep is coming.

oldcrow13oldcrow13over 4 years ago
Take Your Time

I'm enjoying the slow build to your series. Anticipation is sexy because the mind races to guess where this will go.

yawazzyawazzover 4 years ago
Omg

Can't wait for more... Pls hurry

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