by tmwastmwas
Love it! Can’t wait for the next part! 1 a week is torture haha :p
Your story has been good, but slow. 7parts so far and it could have all been in one or two parts. I like the story, but each part is way to short. and just as it starts to get good, it ends.
I hope the next few parts are longer and maybe get into some good stuff.
But DO keep writing.