All Comments on 'Enemy Ch. 04'

I've been waiting for so long for this chapter. Please don't make me wait as long for chapter 5. I love it!

a5. I still wanna see her pregant or have his brothers help him get to her.

It's been a long time coming. Great 2nd act, the 3rd act with the reconcilliation is gonna be sweet.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

The only distraction from an otherwise excellent story is the poor grammar and incorrect spelling. I suggest you find an editor to help you make your otherwise very good stories even better.

I hope that she decides to take her life into her own hands and wins him back on her own! I love this story, don't wait to long for the next installation!

Please update soon, this was great. Please don't make us wait so long!

liked it alot .the best i ever read on this site plz hurry up waitin for the next episode impatiently

I've gotten so lost in this story its ridiculous. These are the things dreams are made of. I'm loving it more and more with each chapter. Please do your readers a favor and don't make us wait so long! The anticipation for this chapter was killing me!

I have to know what will happen next. I wish she had just told her father and brother to go to hell. I love this story, can't wait until the next chapter. Thanks.

Great update, I agree with the other posts about this story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks

This is great stuff, girlie. Keep it coming!

I just stumbled across this story and now i am addicted to just about everything you write. PLEASE update soon. I don't think I could take it if you didn't.

Please don't let your readers wait any longer for a continuation to this story!

You MUST continue this story!!! THIS is THE best writing that I've seen on here thus far. I love a good story and this love story is magnificent and so touching...please, please, please continue it...even if we do have to wait for an installment per month :-) At least finish, please!

Thanks :-)

please carry on!

Please hurry with the next chapter!

omg i loved this story sooooooo freakin much!!! u must continue with it!! dont leave us hanging!!!!!

I enjoyed reading this, thank you for a great read.

However, it would be nice if you have someone (in this case anyone would do) to edit your work before posting, because I easily noticed some typos.

I wish you would just end this story right here, in the fourth chapter, because to me she doesn't deserve to have a happy ending for being so silly to choose her father over him (duh!), though her action could somewhat be understood coz people just crave for what they don't have, many times in the expense of what they've already had.

Redwitch, it is beyond my comprehension why you are making the female looking an absolutely stupid bitch!

Having to read 4 chapters just to arrive at this makes me rather angry with you as the author! These stories are suuposed to be erotic and romantic - the whole plot just sucks!

i've come back to re read this story due to it being one of my faves, obviously this stupid person below me didn't bother to read on. IDIOT!!!

obviously, that person has never read a romance novel! stop trashing one of the best stories on this site!

This is a excellent story!

I'm can't believe the girl is this dumb and really I have no tolerance for people who give up that easy. She acts like a helpless damsel in distress, and he acts like he never really loved her at all. If he did he wouldn't just leave like that. Its not that easy to leave someone you really love.

To have found lose then to lose it is such a tragedy for all of us.

IS SMOKING!!!! By the way, what teenager makes good choices at their age,especially when love is involved? Let's be honest, when love walks in the room we all get stupid and sometimes the best of us turn it into personal moral value.

I feel so sad for them. I just can't cope!

great job so far! I never thought I would be this caught up in a teenage love story, but here I am with my heart breaking for Bianca.

To the haters, give them a break, they are teenagers! and one of them is emotionally scarred from trying to gain her father's love her whole life, I would have been surprised if she did leave with him.

Stupid girl, your father will never love you.. and stupid teenage hormones for not realizing an irrational decision and forcing them to react on pure emotions.

My urge to punch her in the face right now is insane all you had to do was say yes smh