All Comments on 'Enjoying The Sins Of The Son'

Premise looked sort of interesting, but your appalling spelling and misuse of language make the story unreadable. Get a dictionary, spellcheck, and an editor. And hurry.

The story had a good start but it read to me more like an outline of what is to come. You need to expand many of the things that were happening. Plus you need to give a reference to how long things happened.

Pathetic, and as has already been said, your spelling was pathetic. Too big a jump in time at the end totally ruined an already bad story.

Thank you for acknowledging that the people in these stories do have an out. Desmond topped himself. Most of these stories seem to never acknowledge the fact that people do reach a point where the damage being done to them is not worth living through.

Now if authors would just acknowledge that jail would also be preferable to many. 10 years in prison vs 10 years slavery where you have no limits. It’s not even a close call for most. I can tell you if I were Desmond as soon as they started messing with my body I would have found a way to get to the police to turn myself in for embezzlement. And, BTW, that would turn in the board members. Would be a very public mess for them.