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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Tried to finish this, it seemed to have an interesting direction. But in the end, it feels like it was written by a 10 year old, or maybe an immature 14 year old guy. Just so much wrong with the narrative, choice of words (e.g. just one example, accomplished athletes don't talk about "huge trophy's"), the notion that multiple girls are awestruck with a naked guy and his huge dick.

Pass. I'm embarrassed I didn't stop reading at Part 1. I must be really bored.

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I find erotica to be at it's best in written format. There is nothing better than reading something juicy and picturing what's going on inside your head. A story tends to be more scintillating than a picture.