All Comments on 'Entice Pt. 03'

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WhackdoodleWhackdoodlealmost 3 years ago

7” is way above average, and unless her cunt is like the Lincoln tunnel, 7” is just fine.

Your story didn’t make much sense. Good luck.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Judging by the scores on the two previous entries it wasn't difficult to avoid this mess.

Legio_Patria_NostraLegio_Patria_Nostraalmost 3 years ago

I don't see even the hint of a plot line or any normal or even abnormal reaction of the husband. This is the think installment of this series I've read, and not seeing anything except a long protracted piece of 'jerk-off porn' or as some UK blokes term it, 'wank work', I won't be reading any more. When I read, I look for a plot, an unfolding story, and so far, there's nothing but a bunch of unbelievable circus-freak sex between a John Holmes clone and a normal woman who's been zapped by the Martian Slut Ray.

iameaseliameaselalmost 3 years ago

Why?

WTF?

Go away!

Dont write again!

26thNC26thNCalmost 3 years ago

Y’all leave Sweets alone, he’s attracting a solid 2.2 followers per story. Another 17 stories and he will break 100.

nixroxnixroxalmost 3 years ago

1 star no comment I could make would add much difference to the few below.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Liked the development from part l to part ll to part lll. Good going. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Don't bother what others say. Stick to what you do and think is right and correct.

Go for your ideas and views.

Remember barking dogs seldom bite.

If the Dick heads are so vociferous in making shit comments then why not become writer themselves? Let others judge them!!! That they'll never. Because they know their own standard and caliber.

So be happy and keep the good job.

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