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Click hereLate on the second last day the jury withdrew to consider their findings. It was not until mid-morning the following day that the bailiff summoned everybody back into the court.
There was a gasp and a cry from the back of the court as the verdict of GUILTY of MURDER on both charges was read out.
- COMMENTS
inka222212 months agoWhat a shit "story". No punishment for the cheating assholes whatsoever. No ending. The trashy asswipe of a new gf who takes him to swinging resort WITHOUT TELLING him. That portends well of her honesty in relationship. Jeez
Anonymousover 1 year agoThe first story was good, ending it one second before all hell broke loose was inspired.
These sequels are shit. It seems the author noticed, too, and wisely dropped the series.
KRD19254almost 2 years agoWas there a punctured flat tire in the trunk? Where was the DNA found? How did both die? No witness/CCTV to the murders? What about the partial car license plate? Was Lance his lawyer totally incompetent or part of the entrapment?
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Just too loosey goosey writing lacking facts leading readers on. Even some of us Parry Mason fans can see huge holes in this story to get a guilty conviction. ASSume there is another part to this story coming. Nothing about his divorce either.
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2*, hooyah, at best
Anonymousabout 2 years agoplease to gods get an editor. you have the spark of a potentially truly great writer.
