All Comments on 'Epilogue'

I liked the series. You’ve got good writing skills, I enjoyed the constant pov, it really opens the character. Th ending, I don’t think it fits. In the previous chapters, nothing indicated that Alex would tolerate Ramona’s cheating. He told her he doesn’t care what she does. Offering her housing doesn’t fit. It’d work better if he just sold the house, no offers except a quiet divorce.

It was a fun little story, one you can’t take too seriously, but was very enjoyable. Good job, looking forward to your next creation, thanks. KS