All Comments on 'Erin's Turn'

I think this story is fine without the graphic sex. That said, if it does ever develop to a place where graphic sex does occur, it'll probably be super hot, just based off the fact that it's had such a teasing buildup.

As it stands now, it's just a fun distraction to read, and I don't think adding graphic scenes too quickly would fit with the current theme.

The Magic, The Exploration and Discovery

Experimentation with the magic, exploration of the body and exhibition of its mysteries in ERIN are well done with great sympathy for youth shedding childhood innocence and emerging as young adults.

Coming of Age

Eyes yearn,

Bodies burn,

Juices flow,

Instinct Held in control,

As a matter of course

The safest sex is outer-course!