All Comments on 'Erotic Problems and Wet Dreams'

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Extra6660Extra6660about 2 years agoAuthor

I meant to put this in the beginning but I screwed up Adira is intersex and afab (female assigned at birth) he is still a woman even though he uses he/him pronouns. This is a sapphic relationship, please be respectful.

Diamondking666Diamondking666almost 2 years ago

"[...] eager lungs gasping for air it did not need."

I love this! These words manage to vividly illustrate the scene, helping me visualize Christa in her bath, overtaken by pleasure. A good usage of words to spice up an overall cute pair of stories!

I quite like the stories you've written so far and I hope to see more of your work in the future!

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