All Comments on 'Ethan and Mark'

The series has been great!!!! Waiting for more!!!!!!!!!!!

yes i to like looking at spinning spirals

to move the story along it would be great if the nosey window guy became involved

I know it’s been a while since you last posted but I still hope that someday, you’ll choose to continue this story! I regularly come back to reread it. It’s so simple in concept but one of my absolute favorites! I love Ethan as a narrator and his inner monologue is so good. I would love to see more of what he chooses to hypnotize people into. Some authors give their protagonist just one thing but I really like the contrast between how he treats Josh and how he intends to treat Mark.