All Comments on 'Etienne's Reward Ch. 01'

I like it. It's good and make me excited.

Lol! So.... when are you going to write more?

This is a great first submission. It ended too soon!

Can’t wait to read more! I’m really enjoying these characters and the scene set up so far!

Great story, need the rest. My wife and her dominant sister dress me up and make me crawl around on my hands and knees with a dog tail buttplug up my ass, I'm their little puppy dog. Then they take turns fucking me with strapons. I love being dominated.

Superb story line, no over the top but most factual.

It reads easily and well of a story lived and enjoyed!

Hope it goes further..

I see what you mean about writing styles, my dear Lady.

Ignore people about submission lengths. You do you. I particularly love it, I love the straight man submitting to the kink with another male. And I love that it has been an ongoing thing.

Thank you for your feedback. I thought about submitting it all in one go, but I decided to break it up into three parts, mainly because I have a job that doesn't allow me to sit and write all day long like I would like to. I'm sorry you felt this was too short, but hopefully, that means you liked it?

obviously is Lisa...

Should have just made this submission longer, as we know who it is.