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All Comments on 'Evening of Love'

by carljmi

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
could have been great...

too many spelling errors ruined it. Went too fast. Not believable. Expand the detail and make it more real.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

you might want to use spelling and grammar check next time you write a story. other than that good story

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