All Comments on 'Expect One Thing, Get Another Pt. 02'

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JBEdwardsJBEdwardsalmost 3 years ago

What an amazing scene you have painted with your prose. Boy, are these men f**ked up! It seems like everyone's married, too. What a hospital! I wonder if other hospitals are like this one? I admit Filipino women are often hot, but this is a bit crazy. 5* ~~JBEdwards

OldnotDead71OldnotDead71almost 3 years ago
Jasmine is too easy

But then, she's unsatisfied and curious, as are a lot of people these days. So, though it's hard to like her exactly, we can experience the ups and downs of her personal life, though her own POV. As always, well written, Penny.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Beautiful! Perfect story to convince a conservative Asian married lady to become a hot wife and make her husband / partner happy.

shyscholar2shyscholar2about 2 years ago

God this was incredibly hot! As a South Asian guy with a deep lust for Asian women and an envy/ addiction to BBC porn with beautiful Filipina, Vietnamese, Korean etc woman, this story hit so many deep sexual desires

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Get your stories straight Pennylin.....Asian ladies won't ever have anything to do with black men.

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Still learning how to write erotica, which isn't just storytelling but trying to titillate at the same time. The challenge is trying to find a balance between the story and the sex. As another writer told me, readers here don't want to sift through your explication, they just ...

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