All Comments on 'Expired Magic'

I found I really enjoyed this submission. I like the style and the general lack of grammatical errors was a big plus for me. Thanks for sharing.

This story (or at least an earlier version of it) was posted to overflowingbra.com on January 2016. Are you the original author? If not, could you please credit the original author there?

Thanks anonymous - confirming that I am the original author and have changed my psuedonym. I tried adding the other previous sites to my submission because I was sure someone would recognize it, but my first submission was rejected until I removed references/links to external sites. Rule made sense to me but sorry for the confusion. Hope that helps

Just read this and your other story and really enjoyed them!! Hot, weird stuff! ;)