All Comments on 'Exploring the Indian Lamb - Aditi'

Good start. The end felt kind of abrupt, but I suspect this is intended to be Chapter 1, so I don't mind so much. Actual non consent is a turn off for me, but since we had the voice inside Aditi's head that showed she was confused, but into what was happening, it worked for me. Good writing, I would encourage you to have a proofreader go over the next chapter before publishing. There were a few sentences with random letters (probably from revising the sentences, at least that's where my typos show up) that letting somebody proofread will prevent in the future.

Overall, excellent first attempt, good narration, quality dialogue. Keep writing!