All Comments on 'Ezzie The Next Generation Pt. 08'

Ohhh I thank you for getting an editor! I've always loved your stories but they could be a little rough without an edit. Wish I could rate it more than five star

This is fast becoming one of my favourite stories I’ve read on here. The character development you’ve done has quickly got me loving Mary,liz,Anna,and the giant too not to mention auntie n unc so please keep these chapters coming as I check daily for updates. Many many thanks your avid reader Jim.

I love the way you have expanded Mary’s world so fast. It would make sense since she is 18 and is coming into all these wonderful benefits but she is only starting to realize the responsibilities that go with being her. To see how much she loves her family, her g/f and all those she is trying to help is beautiful but she has to watch out for anyone attempting to take advantage because she can be made to look bad which will hurt her and everyone in her orbit as well as the charity.