by BlueBallGuzzy
It's like, the exact same story as Honour thy Mother by JamesRussel, which was already a retelling of Behind Closed Doors by XtinaSmith2017
there is no cock in the world that is that big this is nothing but bull stay with your day job
Over 2foot of cock as big around as a 2 liter bottle going down a womens throat. Interesting concept . I think you should just scrap this and try again
I loved your story, and I hope this is just the first of many chapters to come! I know some people have pointed out that they feel like this story is just a ripoff of a ripoff, but I disagree. While you’ve hit on similar over arching themes, you differ in both style and approach. Very interested to see where you go with this.
Thank you all for the feedback, this was kind of a half-assed chapter that was inspired by the hentai I’ve read by Teterun. For the next I will refine the writing into a true form. Thank you all!
please continue!
to write a story is much more difficult as it seems.
this story is hot, much better then xtina bcd and not so boring as honour thy mother.
thanks
Love huge futa and a tiny man.please keep going this is AWESOME . Forget the other comments this is pure gold
That's a good beginning, I love it when size is absurd !
But it's way too short, I need more now ;)
This is incredible. My only criticism is that it's a little short. Please, do more like this! One of these from a first person perspective would be amazing.
25 inches? That's just absurd. It's bad enough the mother stole his girlfriend and to not only rub it in his face. But to have such an impossible length?
Only, the pacing wasn't good. It was too short. You could easily get away with another 3 pages of build-up.
I read a bunch of these comments and people seem to ignore the fact that they're not here to rate content. If a story contains a fetish that you're not into, that doesn't make it crap. And if you feel the need to comment that a story that involves some fetish you don't like, that's more a reflection on your stupidity than anything. Learn to use the tags to filter out things you don't like.
The writing in this story is fine. Needs a little more consistent pacing and maybe a little more focus on the nasty bits, but overall it's not bad.
SHIT HAD ME ROCK SOLID DAWG
MY NOODLE'S HEAD BLASTED HARDER THAN J.F.K'S
THIS SHIT ROCKED ME HARDER THAN ELVIS
THIS STORY HAD ME JERKIN' LIKE A JACKHAMMER WITH PARKINSON'S
SHIT PUT ME IN A NEW TIME PERIOD
Now he has to live under her roof and it seems like she needs to cum a lot. How long will his ass be safe from her cock I wonder?
Story was alright, only real complaint is that making it 26 inches was a bit absurd to the point of making me chuckle out loud a bit and knocking me out of the story. I suppose that if your intent was to be funny it worked but otherwise using sizes that are quite large but at least seem humanly possible would be more advisable to maintain suspension of disbelief.
sure I can rate it a 1* anonymous on the content. for a "loving" trans mother to steal her sons girlfriend and humiliate him in the process without explanation, its a weak story.
Cool ...
This is amazing. don't mind those stupid comments. Please continue with the session the mother destroys her son's buttocks. I really like this. I hope you want to make various other mother's futanari stories. I like crazy things about a mother having a giant cock and crushing her son's buttocks.
Wow, this hits so many kinks of mine, I don't even know where to start. The size of her balls, the description of the length and girth of her cock and the endless amounts of cum. Thank you very much!
I love ALL of your stories!! I’ve been dying for a story where the girl takes what she wants, no remorse, no worry about anyone else’s feelings!!! Please keep it coming, you’ve got a lifetime fan here!!!!
I love stories of Mother cucking her son or stealing his wife/girlfriend.. This is soo HOT! i wish my mil had a massive cock! Cant wait to read more! 5 stars!