All Comments on 'Familiar Family Ch. 01'

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bshell47bshell47over 1 year ago

Nice start.

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Too shorts, so it's only 3 stars. Promising story, though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

We need a slower build up for the next step. Who accidentally, or deliberately, walks in on who?

Does touching her intimately and sucking her breasts occur, and maybe he feels her lips and tongue briefly, with ensuing unexpected orgasms? Are they scared, shocked, unsure but their love and desire guide them? Do they end up deciding to explore giving each other amazing pleasure, slowly moving toward finding a long term expression of their love?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Poorly written. Are you a 13 year old?

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