All Comments on 'Family Bonding Ch. 02'

Big improvement in your writing. Very hot. I love the dynamic between the three of them. I hope you continue and bring the daughter into it. 5 stars

Great chapters so far, can’t wait for more. As much as I loved the family dynamic, it seems like it will change to Vincent getting Emma all to himself

'And I always kept my wife satisfied.' Apparently not. Atleast I havent read anything about that in the two chapters. Seems like the son is the only one who gets the job done.

Next chapter?

Why does every mom and son story have to involve the father or a third. Kills the taboo nature of the bond if the sluttiness is so out in the open. Bleh.

Good Story, but this is not really a cuckold story. Its more of a loving wife story.

It'a hard to enjoy the story with so many grammatical mistakes, it makes you loose the focus on it. Maybe english is not your first/main languaje? That would explain it. The effort is there.

The balance your striking between raw passionate sex and family intimacy is great. Like the way you haven't fallen into the cliché of little dick husband big dick better lover son and the mild cuckolding is through the mother son bond.

I like that at the end of the chapter she starts to regain a bit of control by "taking her boys in hand" and quite clearly loves and wants them both.

I'm not overly keen on the use of the word slut when it comes to this genre. Mothers in general should be revered and not degraded. I think you've kept the right side of its use by the mother clearly enjoying being lovingly referred to as one and it's in keeping with her enjoyment of rough sex. ( I never thought of love bites as particularly arousing but they are the way. you describe them). I hope you continue to balance the anamlistic with the lovie and the affection

At the moment she is still quite a passive character which I hope iis because of her "shyness". Looking forward to next chapter and daughters arrival. Hope she puts up a bit of a moral fight before succumbing to her own lust and joining in the family fun.

Very hot but wished it was longer. Five stars and a favorite point!