All Comments on 'Family Estranged Ch. 02'

Well, the mother is clearly nuts, and nuts in a sick way. What I'd like is for the two hired thugs, celebrating a job well done, leave the mother and daughter there, still naked and bound. They leave the door unlocked, and two hours later alert a neighbor who comes over and frees them, after first enjoying the view, perhaps a little too much. Once free and back to whatever passes for normal, Skylar becomes frighteningly obsessed and goes on the hunt for Ben and J, since her mother has begged her not to alert the police. She finds Ben in a seedy bar, who pays her the ultimate insult of not even recognizing her. She seduces him, and as they get into bed, she calls him master and holds a gun on him. She enjoys seeing his fear and is about to kill him, when he tells her how her Mom set it all up. Skylar is incredulous and she thinks it's a fool's tale, told out a desperate ploy to save his own life, but nevertheless she is disturbed by it. Ultimately, she kills him anyway. Then she goes after J. You can take it from here! Oh yes: 5*~~JB

Good Story but the end is bullshit.

I think it would help the story if the daughter discovers what her sick in the head mother did when she refuses to join her in ridding their bodies of their rapists bastards. It forces the mother to reveal her sick plot to gain a closer relationship. It backfires as the daughter seeks revenge against her and the two men. Maybe she plans the same thing for their rapists wives and daughters. The rapists are tazed and secured, along with mommy, while thugs Skylar hired, are unleashed on the rapists innocent family members. Obviously, crazy as her mother, the daughter faces her mom and attackers and says, "always know who you're fucking with.". Just a thought.

Love your work, but the end to this story seemed a little rushed and literally came out of nowhere and didn't make much sense to me.

It is absolutely nonsense when the victims enjoy their rape, but a mother orchestring a rape is unbeleavable. Sorry, zero points from the german voters.

PLEASE CONTINUE! I love your stories, some of the best on the site.

And yes, the son needs to experience some incest AND Forced Bi with the intruders.