All Comments on 'Family Love Pt. 03: Initiation'

Again a very good continuation. Kept me hot through out the story. There was ample time given to all characters. I want to see more of Ivy. The last part means there will be another part right? I am excited what you have in store. Don't take too much time for the next part please :)

I liked it. Sometimes the POVs were getting a little confusing. It would have been better to have gone with a third person POV.

Are Olivia and her mother lovers? Will they be playing with Tim and family?

Update soon.

Cheers

I can not believe Katie chose some one other than Tim to give her virgin a to, Great story though.

Great story. I took your advice and reread chapters 1 and 2. I'm very glad I did. Chapter 3 was hot and erotic. Looking forward to more chapters. I hope a little sooner this time. Lol. 5stars

Great series! Please finish it

So Katie first pussy time wasn't with Tim, and the anal one she had a chance to goes to... his Dad? Each chapter she seems more like Eric's girlfriend instead of Tim's.