All Comments on 'Family Shock: Home for the Holiday'

Absolutely fabulous! What a brilliant invention your Order of Syndom is, Jasmine. By the time I'd finished this opening chapter, I was dripping like a leaky tap! You ask do your readers want more? May I answer on behalf of myself? Yes! Yes! Yes! I wonder could you arrange to invite Selina's uptight parents to the ceremony? I really would like them initiated into the Order. Five stars seem a paltry reward for such a beautifully perverted and kinky tale, but it's all I have to give. More please!

It was good got off a couple of times while reading please continue this story and get selina's family involved and mixed up in the playing antics

Fucking hot! The story is much longer than I prefer (2 or 3 pages) but, delightfully, so am I. I hope you do cunt-inue the story, Jasmine. Thanks for the arousal! Five stars!

The illustration made one of the best incest stories even better.

And, of course, would love if you write sequels.

more, more, more brilliant 👏🏻 🙌

On the original release, we were teased her in-laws helping her corrupt Selina's mother and dragging her into the sex cult. So I still would love to see that <3

Dr beulahthemick; Well, Jasmine, this time you have excelled yourself, I'd love to be a member of your Order of Syndom,, but then who wouldn't. I was dripping wet by halfway down page2 and had to stop to get some relief long before the bottom of page 3. Next chapter ASAP, and you absolutely must include Selina's family, especiallly at the wedding. Five stars naturally, should be many more.

While I always enjoy your stories immensely, I would enjoy it more if you left your political leanings out of them. You didn't always be so blatantly political. I come here to read erotica, not politics. And I don't single you out, I don't wish to see it from either side of the spectrum. To be blunt, let's just read about fucking, and not someone's left or right viewpoints. Thank you.

It was great first time, but the new editing and the illustrations take it to the next level. Thanks Jasmine

Always wanted the sequel to this, but the illustrations are a very good substitute

Fantastic is all I can say. Welcome to the family is always a fun way to look at life.

I remember this story from back in 2020. I liked it then and still like it now. I don't know what program you are using to create your images but they are fantastic. The images did enhance the story for me. The only thing I wish was that the images could include shoes. I love stockings and I equally love heels. Not seeing sexy heels in the images lets me down a little, but I understand that it is probably a limitation of the program. Still, all in all still a 5 star rating from me.

This is just an amazing story! Lucky I was sitting on a leather chair :-) Well done! Amy x

What a wonderful story! This is the way a family should be, especially around the Holiday get togethers. No family bickering, family fucking instead. I would love to read more to this story.

What happens with Selinas parents?

Loved it, especially the illustrations

Anna

Off to a good start. Does Derek get Selina's mom in front of her dad.

They need to seduce Selina’s mom away from her dad.

"Meaning that out of an average 100 women on the pill, by the end of a year 17... "

Correct would be somethinge like 1-2 out of 1000.

I would love to read sequels. Perhaps Selena can seduce a favored niece or nephew. Definitely make her mom and dad wedding day entertainment. I really enjoy the little universe you have created with your stories. Please continue to write.

I'am all for "Family Shock: Incestuous Family Orgy" for sure

Great story & images! You encouraged us to post our own pics. Thanks again - M & N

Yes to any/all sequels!

The suggestions above will be great, with an addition to the wedding one, if I could be so bold: Selina's parents arrive and her mom gets used, and that reversals why she's so mean, no good sex. Her category is mean because of an inferiority complex from a former girlfriend/ wife cucking him.

I hope there is more to come. Definitely can't wait to see where it will lead.

Fucking HOT. Please do more

Excellent story. Please keep writing. I like all of the variations listed.

Fucking awesome as all of your other stories, I didnt want it to end. I would have loved even more if selena was shocked and Jane and Joanne had to seduce her for more time in to becoming a slut.

Yes, you need to continue this stories.

I’ll gladly spend the holidays with this family!

Jasmine, this is another great story from you. HOT, HOT, HOT! Any of the follow up stories sound incredible. I always check for new submissions from you, and rarely am I disappointed with your writing.

Needed to have more mom/son action. Only 1 short instance of that the end. Real shame.

Please let the story continue. The wedding could be good!

Loved it. Like to have more of the same. Erotic, sexy, horny and enormously entertaining in all aspects.

Usual fun and games.

More please.

Love the expanded story. Would like more, both the family and other new families.

Oh yes! Much more please. Thank you for creating this wonderful world. Perhaps a visit to a bridal shop to try on dresses (and other things) before the wedding? ...and certainly the bride's parents MUST be invited to the wedding !!

Yes,, definitely more .. as a young woman I was led down a short path like she was..

Definitely a fantastic story. After the few pages I remembered reading before. Didn't realize it had been 3 years, but continued reading because it was a fun enjoyable and hot story. I for one would enjoy all 3 of the choices. Looking forward to reading more of this family. 5stars

Please write all those this was awsome

Definitely more please. The Blu Lounge, the wedding (watching her parents run would be funny 😁) , as they get older, as more people join the family, any idea you have. You are the best writer on Literotica.

Amazing story, please keep it going. Working in her parents would be fun, as well as a 20 year down the road update. Love it.

Please keep the story going!

Keep this story going

wish I had a family like that !

We want more of this story. The wedding, her mother being inducted

You write the best love stories. Thank you and please continue.

Yes to all of the additional stories!

That was fantastic fun!!!!! LOVE your work!!!!

Fantastic!

Can't wait for the continuation of the series

Great work as always

Loved it!

Crazy wild! Great illustrations, too.

My god i want to live that life in reality! Shame about my age & not being in a position to live that life. What a great story & a great writer! Please much much more of the same!

3rd time i have read this story! Please do a follow urgently the story itself is screaming out for it.

Perhaps based around the wedding reception & their honeymoon at a swingers resort? What ever you write your choice but please do something more. PS you are an outstanding writer!

Great story! Can’t wait to read what’s next! Great illustrations, especially the two crazy positions!