All Comments on 'Family Therapy!'

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dieter40sndieter40sn10 months ago

Ich fand es sehr geil

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

amazing story, love to read more

mako64mmako64m10 months ago

give the characters more depth, it will help you attract readers. Will read part 2

furburger69furburger6910 months ago

love a most mind control stories this is going well keep up the great work mate.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Gonna be honest: WAY too blunt. It reads like a bulletin board of ideas. Also, the method of mind control is very jumbled. He gave them a potion at the start but then he apparently uses some random mind control power later? And really, Dr. Mysterio? Kind of hard to take him seriously with a name like that...

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

This is silly funny smut, I’d like it was more subtle but sometimes all we need is a not so deep story

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