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by MzBea

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GoddessViolet86GoddessViolet86about 2 years ago

Her being 18 and that ignorant is so off putting. Good luck on your next story though

Lee2012Lee2012about 2 years ago

This plot has strong potential and I hope you continue. The beginning of the story was a bit confusing with the back and fort, but all in all, a great read. Very telling and inline with the reactions of a virgin being deflowered and spot on with the intense squirting.

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I write to exercise my brain. I write to practice my diction. I write for no particular reason, other than the stories in my head demand release. Thank you for your support and constructive criticism. I thank everyone for comments, good and bad lol... I appreciate anyone tak...