All Comments on 'Fantasy Comes to Life!'

by Mook0098

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LimeyracerLimeyracer5 months ago

Okay - so what were HER fantasies?

Bargyn1Bargyn15 months ago

What's good for the goose has to be good for the gander! 5*

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Nice segue from fantasy to reality (in the story). Well written in terms of comp issues, including dialogue.

An understanding but definitely mischievous wife--who he should also definitely make pay for her tossing in a cocksucking event when he definitely said six WOMEN; a logical penance would be to place a pussy-licking interlude into whatever HER favorite fantasy turns out to be.

Nice. Keep writing.

MLJ

49ers6949ers693 months ago

Pretty good until you had the dick in your mouth. You should do the same concept kind of story except with your wife getting her pussy licked by five of your friends.

HARDUP1957HARDUP1957about 1 month ago

Great right up to him sucking dick, I would have to call it off then. Can't wait for the wife's fantasy!

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