All Comments on 'Father's Fall from Grace Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Great job. Getting Hotter. I hope Andy leads the in heat Mia & their Bull back to the bed so he can mount Mia properly. The Bull should still be ready to mate/breed even so soon after mating/breeding with Andy. It's becoming clear that Andy is the choreographer of this dance & directing things the way she wants them to go. I like the series. Keep the chapters flowing at us. 5☆

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Can’t wait for the next chapter for Mia to fuck her Daddy, and it will be interesting to see if her sister joins in too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

And the beat goes on. Andy is proving quite capable of topping from the bottom. She definitely seems the one pulling the strings. All indications still seem to point to her manipulating the whole thing. It very much appears she will end up corrupting both families, having them all not only under her thrall, but fucking each other.

Or who knows? It could all be a Bobby Ewing like dream, and he wakes up from daydreaming in his therapy session for sex addiction. Though I would certainly hope the former. As for all chapters, 5/5 stars. Oh, and thanks for the shout out.

Dewey Cheatham

CrankThzJackInDaBoxCrankThzJackInDaBoxabout 1 month ago

ZERO EXCEPTIONS NONE EXCEPTIONS - SO FAR THEE BEST FROM FRANCHISE -

NONE EXCEPTIONS ZERO EXCEPTIONS

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