All Comments on 'Father's Fall from Grace Pt. 06'

Left turn into stupid.

Well that certainly took an unexpected turn. I still maintain Andy is running the whole show. Wouldn't be surprised if this group is affiliated with her. The question is, does she get pissed they overstepped their bounds? Or is she so vengeful she not only lashes out sexually, but physically? Very intriguing chapter. As usual 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham

I'm getting off this trainwreck of stupid. Wow. Such a brittle, fragile ego.

everybody that did read the last reasoning portion , already expects - - that Andy , she got those people ,

doing this . i'm gonna officially go another route , along say (( AMBER HOLLOWWAY [ personally debuts ]

{ ANDY's mother } : she hired , along boss , everything happened ))

i'm also gonna go on another kinda theory - - MIA supposedly , meaner SAMANTHA . MIA supposedly ,

meaner LIZ ( from things , became mentioned ) . so . what if . ANDY told , MIA thee , entire plan , about make ,

father paying . [ some point down line , MIA learns , that ANDY , getting soft growing soft . along she ,

does decide , make him pay dearly ] ............

{ something wrong about fact , that MIA , isn't mentioned being around . while situation , does unfold

inside house . especially when . MIA meaner , than SAMANTHA . especially when . MIA meaner than LIZ }

Not a huge fan of this development. If they ruin his daughter I’m dropping this

This story started with a great premise and has become increasingly silly. Now it's just plain silly. I think you have a great writing style, don't waste it writing about mindless girls who just want to be cum dumpsters -- you don't need 6 chapters for that. The diabolical daughter that slowly draws her dad into a world of depravity is a great premise shame you wasted it.

What a shifty ending!