All Comments on 'Feeding My Curiosity Pt. 05'

Morgan, I'm confused, of course that's nothing new for me but... Are you being ambiguous here? Surely this can't be the end of two guys that have such a strong connection. That would be far to anticlimactic and ruin the whole story for romantics like me. So, I suppose I'll just have to keep the last two lines of this chapter in mind and hope for a part 6 of this great story. MLF

Perfect ending, anything further would be overthinking it.

Love your writing style. Not sure if you write from the standpoint of semi-biographic or pure fantasy, but either way HOT stories. AS far as the character Morgan is concerned in your last series, he may find himself in a thinking and slightly confused state. As was I when I first met my lover of 18 months. As a married man, I was confused but smitten and after a few days decided I wanted more. Hope your character realizes the same. Thanks for sharing

Rated it "like it" but that being said what began two chapters back left me to say, "I'm confused" and still looking for answers. The underlying tone was Alpha/submissive in training. He allowed the "one and only ever bottom" meaning he intended it to be long-term and it is the mood of the written format. Longterm relationships take many forms. I was excited to see a true Alpha/submissive in training with David/Morgan and the fiancé hopefully coming back into the picture since she pushed the introduction.

A possible perfect ending would be that she was an ex of Davids brother so that would close the loop when he discovered the new relationship and told her about it. She would knock on the door and find them together and that would be the final scene. I digress. It seemed like the submissive personality was about to be developed and brought forward and that was exciting to watch.