All Comments on 'Felicia and Bo'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Get the divorce first.

She loved her husband? I'm sure he really wants to be away from home for months at a time earning a living to support her. Just do him a favor and divorce him before becoming the slut you obviously are. Sorry for the rant, but I'm not much for infidelity. The writing isn't bad. Keep up the efforts. Thanks, Tim

iakatziakatzabout 13 years ago
Pretty good so far...

but you need to continue the story in another chapter. I'm a guy but I do enjoy the build up to the sex and then what happens next versus a page long description of them going at it. Don't get me wrong, I do like the sex part but I like some of it left to the imagination. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

The man is away for business, trying to earn a living for them. It's not like he's on vacation somewhere. Meanwhile she is busy enjoying the company of an old flame. Hey if they feel that old spark fine, get a divorce then induldge all you want.

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