All Comments on 'Felicity's Taken'

I agree with graymangazer, the story went off track when she went from being terrified on the beach to actually enjoying being raped. She's obviously dumb as a rock, telling a stranger her husband was away and no one would miss her, but she's part of a sex trafficking ring now. Being a breeding slave and raped repeatedly is hardly a safe future, to now enjoy her predicament. Started out interesting though.

I like this story, don't make me wait too long for the next chapter. Please.

Mmmmmmm, I'm sure that it won't take long before her body starts to stretch to accommodate the first sprog!

It begs to be continued.

THE TAKING

Zoe presents a past paced description of a kidnapping by a slave catcher and preparation for auction. The only question is would professionals who take the risks in order to reap a maximum yield mix business with pleasure? Dutch Schultz, a liquor baron during US prohibition once refused a drink: "I never touch that stuff."