by ThisIsTheRealMeBby
Story flow seems to be OK, expectations are building and it has not got out of hand, yet!
Keep continuing on this path and it might be a good read.
Very nice, a good continuation from before. I think some self exploration of her coming to terms with her identity and what she is going through and no pressure or actions from her girlfriend urging her along would be good maybe while she is home alone while girlfriend is away at work for the day.
And… when she slapped him, he should’ve screamed in her face walk upstairs and took everything off and said fuck this, that’s it we’re or done!
And getting past that while he’s at home, he should “accidentally” tripped and twisted his ankle because of the shoes. And have to call her at work to come take him to the hospital, meanwhile taken off everything so that they could go to the hospital for an x-ray and now she should feel real bad that he got hurt because of her and tell her “well looks like your dream is coming true.”
And one last thing for you, Mr., or Mrs. author. We know what’s coming it’s typical, he’s going to masturbate, she’s gonna find out, she’s going to put him in a chastity cage.
Then comes the makeup and the wig. Then she’s gonna look at himand go “you’re not much of a man I need a man for a boyfriend”. She is going to cuckold him and that’s the end of that relationship.
I know I’m being a pest, but I’m standing up for the kid. At least, give him some balls and stand up to her at least once, and say no! Before she takes his balls away.
Well, obviously your story has my interest. Otherwise I wouldn’t keep making these comments. I’m just looking out for the kid. let him grow a pair and tell her no for once just something so she knows she can’t walk all over him and that he has some form of control.
This is headed to cuckold sissy way too fast that’s not fun for the couple
Once again, this universe doesn't include scissors of knives? She's getting bitchy. I would cut the locks loose, just to fuck with her and show her she doesn't run things.
the slamming is the end for me, I am out of the story, it started nice with love but this ends no good
I immediately stopped reading what was shaping up to be an awesome story series at the point of un-discussed forced exposure and then physical abuse.
Consensual play is one thing but the girlfriend crossed a fucking line in stone, not sand, with her behavior.
I may come back at some point but this behavior is unacceptable.
Too bad, so sad.
Really enjoying this brilliant series! I hope you're not discouraged by the few negative comments, there always seem to be a band of 'anonymous' commentors that get very angry at the thought of a woman controlling a man!
I for one love the manipulative relationship between these characters, and the fact that they're being rated so well suggests many others do to. Well done on such a great to the series, and I hope to read more soon.
I agree. Cut the shoes off and be changed back when she gets home. Fun is fun, but there’s no reason to put up with assault or abuse.
I am enjoying this story a lot and while some forceful behaviour will be necessary no doubt to overcome reluctance it would be a shame if it developed into another abusive relationship. It's ok so far please keep going but it is a fine line unless you intend to go for a hard line femdom theme.
I like this story-story very much, and I would like to be like... well, again I don't have a name, is it a problem to give a name? for Carla. Be able to dress like this 👗, as Carla wishes 👩🏻, be a sissy girl for her 👧🏻.
I am not at all surprised by Carla's dominant role and often decisive behavior towards the sissy girl. And even the punishment of being slapped 😢 and then being forced to walk all day by closing the heels on your feet, which will give you the opportunity to learn to walk in these beautiful high heels 👠.
Greetings from Poland, SissyBoy from Warsaw. 📖👩🏻❤️🧒🏻👧🏻
Bardzo Mi się podoba ta historia-opowiadanie, i sama bym chciała być jak... no właśnie znów Mi brak imienia, nazwy, czy to jest jakiś problem nadać imię? dla Carli. Móc się tak ubierać 👗, jak zażyczy sobie Carla 👩🏻, być dla niej dziewczynką-sissy 👧🏻. Wcale nie dziwię się tej dominującej roli i często zdecydowane postępowanie Carli wobec dziewczynki-sissy. A nawet kara jaką jest spoliczkowanie 😢 a następnie zmuszenie przez zamknięcie szpilek na stopach do chodzenia cały dzień, co da możliwość nauczenia się chodzić w tych pięknych szpilkach 👠.
Pozdrawiam z Polski, SissyBoy z Warszawy. 📖👩🏻❤️🧒🏻👧🏻
Another fantastic story!! Keep up the good work! This has already become my favorite series on this site by far. I've reread the whole thing 7 times already. I just can't wait to see what happens next :)
I'm glad that she didn't bring any extra people into it and didn't find a lover to replace him that's what usually happens but glad that that didn't happen was a great story and it was really fantastic take care
Being a male who enjoys being submissive this has been a great story so far I do hope you continue it.
Yhank you.
Wow, if only I had had a lady like Loren earlier in my life when I was dressing up. A woman who would take care of me and train me to become her live-in maid, wife, and sex toy for her own pleasures. She could have been a real woman or a transgender woman with that extra-large cock. I could have enjoyed both worlds and I would treat her as my queen.
This is well written. There's a slow build of excitement as their relationship transitions to her controlling him. I appreciate the gradual dawning of pleasure as he continues to be brought further and further along. I look forward to reading additional chapters and new stories.
The slow and steady progression is very good. Makes it even more exciting for the next part
great story please write more I like it very much I hope you makes it even more exciting next part I`m already waiting.
I'm not sure what to say without the next chapter! I've enjoyed what chapters you've written! Where's this Carla? I want her for my girlfriend!
I love this story please keep it going I sure wish that I had some one to do this to me < I would love for this I need happen to me > I need a girl friend like her .
8 months away from last posting, sad to see it not continuing. I wanted to see if she let the power go to her head and just turn him into a pathetic waste or if she did love him and they found new fun.
Please, more! Carla needs to complete the transition. Wig, makeup, makeup lessons, breastforms, girl's night out, the whole nine yards! 5/5
Why did Carla have to turn abusive? It was so much better when it was loving and supportive, not forced. Still well written.