All Comments on 'Fight'

To me it only looks like a scenario for more elaborate story. For now it's just that, outline of more and better.

Dude what? Atleast give your characters a name. That was incomprehensible.

It’s a story. Make up names. Make it readable for gods sake.

The story could use more details, even ignoring the fact that you didn't even name your characters. Put some effort into it.