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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Really need to Proof Read , CAREFULLY. I have seen a suggestion to record your Proof reading, then play the recording while reading along.

You even have a few words, sancity being one, that are way out of place. If you think you have a word that you wold like to use, open a second header and search the word (maybe header is incorrect; another access into your computer),

Your potential to create essays of this genre is really good; just need to Polish the story before submitting.

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