by JulietGolf
I liked it a lot - it was just that the subliminal messaging working so immediately stretched my suspension of disbelief so far it snapped
Otherwise - well, it is no more unlikely than almost all of Aston's - and for once the girl wins - so 5 stars it is
I think a great Chapter 2 would be to take the Video and hire three large Black men to arrange to seduce Chris or Mike's Fiancee's maybe on the night of their bachelor party. Maybe one guy as a dancer, another as a bartender, and the biggest of course as a bouncer. One of them managing to get the young lady to come to his room for a nightcap. Then start the video as the two relax, before being interrupted by his two friends and shortly after that the subliminal fun begins. Chapter 3 would be Jake's new girlfriend, Chapter 4 the other Fiancee..!