All Comments on 'Finally had Sex with My Friend'

Please, for the love of English, GET AN EDITOR.

Is English your native language?

Please don't inform us - or get someone to proof read it first.

My little brother could have written this quickie better

Bad neds to learn nd spelling

This was about erotic as a trip around Tesco!!

Yes, oh ok that happened. Let the little man off his English. He will learn it in school this season

Need to improve the grammar. Subtracts from the story.

Please try another story in a few years once you have some experience. Both sex and writing improve with practice.

All you Anonymous people comments, which is probably the same person wanting to comment & hide behind an anonymous log on, yes my English is not 100% but let’s face it, if you’re such a fantastic person then what you doing on here, you should be out trying to get some. But you probably don’t go out as you want to ride through peoples stories & commenting on there English