All Comments on 'Finding My Place Pt. 02'
by LarryToLaura
- 12 Comments
Anonymousover 5 years agoLove the story but am not a fan of where you stop your chapters Teasing is ok but you just do a bitch cut off.
LarryToLauraover 5 years agoAuthorI’m about a third of the way through the next installment which will alleviate many of your frustrations as it will have fully exotic scenes. These first two where mostly world building, important character introdutions, and the laying of ground work. The meat of the story starts in the next installment.
Anonymousover 5 years agoI love these stories of "reluctant" trans girls learning to love being girls
Anonymousover 5 years agoLiterotica has gone down the drain with all these useless and space filling stories .... 🙄
Anonymousover 5 years agoI agree slightly about the endings, I started reading this submission for gratification which hasn't happened but I am very intrigued by the story and find it hard to put down,very well done and written although some small mistakes.
Anonymousover 5 years agoAnd interesting concept too, can't wait until that massive dick resizes her asshole.
Anonymousover 5 years agoPlease bring the next chapters faster! This is such a good series, I check everyday for the next chapter!
prodigalspoonover 5 years agoI've enjoyed the first couple of these instalments
Like someone else mentioned, a few small mistakes so maybe worth seeing if you can pick up an editor
Anonymousover 5 years agoHow often do you plan on releasing these / when is the next one, love it so far.
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