All Comments on 'Fiona’s Crush Has a Big Dick'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

One of the best stories I've read. Really consistent voice throughout.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Girl comment: I don't really see it as being realistic. If main character is that innocent, the boy would have to help her along. Plus, does she really refer herself to a slut? Kinda hate that. Why r girls always portrayed as a slut if sexual? Maybe watch ur wording.

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I'm a professional by day, musician by night, artist at heart. In my writing, I like to explore the gray area between emotional/sexual innocence and awareness, and as a result, most of my stories involve college aged characters. That transition happened for me during or jus...