All Comments on 'Fiona's Dilemma'

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Getting over the language was difficult, but as the story progressed, it became less of an issue and I was able to settle in on the characters and how they interacted with each other. Good story overall with a lot of little side stories and happenings.

RTR10RTR106 months ago

Didn't even occur to Per that, had his wife NOT been ok with the situation, he would have lost everything. His wife, his child, AND his farm (she owned half & could have sold her half to a developer or something). I wondered if that's why the author put that in, that maybe it would come up later. But I enjoyed how it ended.

Bargyn1Bargyn16 months ago

Good story, translation creates some difficulties making the flow irregular, great ending. SO many possibilities for continuation.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Lost me when (alliteration award) "the sun sparkle"d, but you can't separate sentences!

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Elderly gentleman been writing all my life, but reports/investigations and different academic works. Now I have transgressed into erotic short stories. Much more fun. When writing a story I want it to have a twist, something unexpected, somewhere. Sometimes that is not possibl...