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by Veroticagirl

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Not sure what you are trying to accomplish, but it is herky jerky and all over the place. No continuity and certainly the erotica proposed in emotional portrayl of feelings is poor at best. All of this is lost with poor description and simply strange.

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Not here to get involved with anyone, so please, no messages regarding that. I'm writing again, so I would like some honest feedback and help to be a good writer. My stories are mainly my fantasies that may or may not lead to a story. I would appreciate comments that would ma...