All Comments on 'Fire in September'

by WillDevo

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 2 years ago

Fun story! Your shortest so far.

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SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunover 2 years ago

Really well done! Great story.

SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfireover 2 years ago

A sweet story, just a sexy snapshot of life, great for 750 words. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Much ado about nothing. Was it really a story about anything?

teedeedubteedeedubover 2 years ago

You goofy shits. Can I smell your....... I've never heard that line. Believe me, I will use it. Great shorty.

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