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by max_cumberbatch
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Anonymous2 months agoGood premise.
But rushed.
First date sex needed some trepedation.
He likes "everything" about her. Too nebulous. Needed her to ask him to be specific. Her ass? Her legs? Her breasts?
Four stars.
EastCoaster12 months agoNice job for a first story... 4 stars from here, and a follow to read your next piece.
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Well done.
Anonymous2 months agoThick and curvy with huge tits and giant ass, BUT without being "heavyset"..... Tell me a man wrote this without telling me a man wrote this.
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