All Comments on 'First Meeting Ch. 02'

by ynona

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RossDanielsRossDanielsover 16 years ago
Wonderfully written

The author has a tremendous gift for storytelling and a wonderful command of language. Besides that, she writes some very hot sex scenes! Well-worth the read.

alluring83alluring83over 16 years ago
Sizzle

As you should have expected...I LOVED it. Thanks for the heads up when you posted, as I had just checked yesterday...and I wasn't disappointed. The characters are quite real and I love how the story (among other things) constantly flows.

RogueLurkerRogueLurkerover 16 years ago
oh my!

a very steamy continuation of the story. a nice balance of character development and *ahem* action.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
OMG

that was so erotic and intense..have you ever thought of a short novel?? please write again.....amazing

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
So Hot!

You really have a talent for writing. I really enjoyed this chapter and can't wait to read more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Oh My God!!!!!

I am leaving my office now.... to get the man I've been talking to to fuck my pussy and ass with his thick huge COCK!!! I NEED TO CUM SOOOO BAD!!!!

Robin

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