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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Why didn't either of them have jumper leads?

I'd have thought, given the climate of wherever they are, that it would be a simple thing to have them in case of little accidents like this.

Nice story, though!

AnnaValley11AnnaValley11almost 4 years ago
Great first story - more please

Wonderfully respectable debut story.

Will be following you so I don't miss your future submissions

The_Artfull_CodgerThe_Artfull_Codgeralmost 4 years ago
Well done

For a first attempt, well done.

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Naturopath, Nutrition Coach, loves to cook healthy (and sometimes not-so-healthy) foods, workout and write all kinds of stories in my spare time. Voracious reader, single mom, loves life and intelligent, well-read people